Stop Slop Skill ยท Red-pen editing

Stop Slop Skill: Keep the Meaning. Cut the Slop.

Keep the writer's meaning. Cut the predictable phrasing.

The optimized Stop Slop workflow locks facts and voice, opens only the references a draft needs, resolves every flagged span, and repeats the weakest review dimensions until the existing 35/50 threshold is met.

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About This Skill

Stop Slop is Hardik Pandya's red-pen editing Skill for preserving source facts, voice, required terms, and uncertainty while removing predictable AI phrasing and formulaic rhythm.

Source and Release

Provenance

Upstream author
Hardik Pandya
Revision
8da1f030185bdfe8471220585162991eaeb970e9
License
MIT

Antigravity release

Version
0.300.1-c1377cc4f08b
Package hash
sha256:7f0ded77f0997c8f7c55b4d66c2025229b1cee50dd950f028559558eac44f5ce
Package status
approved
Files
7
ZIP size
8.8 KB

Changelog

  • Deterministic ZIP built from the optimized package with a versioned SHA-256 artifact.

What We Improved

A red-pen pass leads both invocation branches

The model-facing description now covers drafting new prose and revising supplied text without repeating the old metadata trigger.

A source lock before the first rewrite

Facts, claims, names, numbers, dates, quotations, audience, voice, links, formatting, length limits, and uncertainty are recorded before changing words.

Conditional references and a four-gate revision loop

Phrase, structure, and example references load only when a flagged span needs them; every flag must resolve or carry a reason before the weakest dimensions repeat.

The original 35/50 threshold remains the finish line

The optimized Skill keeps the upstream scoring bar instead of inventing a new quality scale or claiming authorship detection.

Quick Start

  1. 1Supply the draft or brief and record its facts, voice, required terms, links, and uncertainty.
  2. 2Diagnose the exact spans that feel generic, staged, vague, or mechanically rhythmic.
  3. 3Load only the phrase, structure, or example reference relevant to each flagged span.
  4. 4Rewrite the smallest spans, audit the source lock, and repeat the weakest dimensions until the 35/50 bar is met.

Core Capabilities

Source lock

Keeps the writer's facts, voice, required terminology, links, formatting, and uncertainty in view before editing.

Conditional diagnostics

Loads phrase, structure, and example references only when the draft needs their guidance.

Smallest-span rewrite

Changes the flagged span while preserving precise technical language, quotations, and deliberate voice choices.

35/50 revision gate

Scores directness, rhythm, trust, authenticity, and density, then repeats the weakest dimensions as needed.

Use Cases

Marketing draft cleanup

Keep the supplied offer, facts, and voice while replacing formulaic copy.

Technical prose review

Protect exact terms, paths, and constraints while removing vague or repetitive scaffolding.

New prose from a brief

Build a source lock from the brief before drafting and reviewing the result.

Source diff and package proof verified

Evidence: source diff

Verified source-diff evidence

This release proves canonical source lineage, package inventory, the optimized true diff, and an immutable artifact. It does not claim runtime outcomes or visual comparisons.

  • .scratch/kan-300/production-release/source-evidence/candidates/stop-slop/original-inventory.json#/entries?sha256=6441805b9f3d7e703465ab3a31eb63b31687be1f6f772bd27c467d8304b07602
  • .scratch/kan-300/production-release/source-evidence/candidates/stop-slop/optimized-inventory.json#/entries?sha256=17c60eba11e4465a653c4fd33a8a7e204a3061d822d17113c27f597810a807a8
  • .scratch/kan-300/production-release/source-evidence/candidates/stop-slop/change-set.json#/evidenceUnits/0?sha256=c17d394eba86778eb306fa1df00d1060d79528fab21df1d15c94081d9477f1ff
  • .scratch/kan-300/production-release/source-evidence/candidates/stop-slop/change-set.json#/evidenceUnits/1?sha256=c17d394eba86778eb306fa1df00d1060d79528fab21df1d15c94081d9477f1ff
  • .scratch/kan-300/production-release/source-evidence/candidates/stop-slop/change-set.json#/evidenceUnits/2?sha256=c17d394eba86778eb306fa1df00d1060d79528fab21df1d15c94081d9477f1ff
  • .scratch/kan-300/production-release/source-evidence/candidates/stop-slop/change-set.json#/evidenceUnits/3?sha256=c17d394eba86778eb306fa1df00d1060d79528fab21df1d15c94081d9477f1ff
Verification receipt
.scratch/kan-300/production-release/source-evidence/candidates/stop-slop/change-set.json?sha256=c17d394eba86778eb306fa1df00d1060d79528fab21df1d15c94081d9477f1ff
Source-diff receipt
.scratch/kan-300/production-release/source-evidence/candidates/stop-slop/change-set.json?sha256=c17d394eba86778eb306fa1df00d1060d79528fab21df1d15c94081d9477f1ff

SKILL.md

# Stop Slop

This edition derives from Hardik Pandya's stop-slop package at 8da1f030185bdfe8471220585162991eaeb970e9.

## Four-gate workflow

Lock the source, draft or diagnose, rewrite against the lock, and audit the final prose. Load the phrase, structure, and example references only when their flags apply. Repeat the weakest dimensions until the existing 35/50 score is met.

The seven-file repository package, README, changelog, references, and MIT license remain intact. This release edition intentionally has no real prose comparison.

Frequently Asked Questions

FAQ

What does Stop Slop preserve?
The candidate locks supplied facts, claims, names, numbers, dates, quotations, audience, point of view, tone, required terms, links, formatting, length limits, and uncertainty before editing.
Does Stop Slop identify who wrote a passage?
No. The optimized Skill describes textual patterns and preserves the source lock; it does not claim to identify the text's author or generator.
What is the 35/50 bar?
The original package scores directness, rhythm, trust, authenticity, and density. A total below 35 starts another revision of the weakest dimensions.
Is a prose comparison available?
No. Before/after output and blind-reader choice are intentionally not rendered in this release edition; the proof plan remains outside this source-diff scope.
Can I download it now?
Yes. Download the approved immutable Stop Slop Skill: Red-Pen Editing for Clearer AI Prose package from this page. Its source revision, file count, byte size, SHA-256, and release receipt are shown here; this evidence does not claim runtime outcomes.

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Quick Info

Author
Hardik Pandya
Published
Aug 1, 2026
Category
Writing
Version
0.300.1-c1377cc4f08b

Tags

Writing qualityRed-pen editingSource preservation

Trigger Phrases

Use these phrases to activate this skill in your AI coding assistant:

run a red-pen passremove formulaic AI phrasingclean up this draftpreserve the writer's voice
Stop Slop Skill: Red-Pen Editing for Clearer AI Prose